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ink and green
more confusion is all i need
it was beautiful
muted light and green eyes
beer spills held-breaths
delicate lies
these cold fingers trace
black swirls and angel wings
teeth in my shoulder
hand against lace
arched-back whispers
mornings of regret
he has become something
more than his reality
and I'm so sorry
but I think I have ruined
everything
for green eyes
and a soft tongue
trace against my thigh
tangled limbs
red satin lips
pressed against stars
etch myself
with his half-moon scars
muted light and green eyes
beer spills held-breaths
delicate lies
these cold fingers trace
black swirls and angel wings
teeth in my shoulder
hand against lace
arched-back whispers
mornings of regret
he has become something
more than his reality
and I'm so sorry
but I think I have ruined
everything
for green eyes
and a soft tongue
trace against my thigh
tangled limbs
red satin lips
pressed against stars
etch myself
with his half-moon scars
Anstey on Mar. 13 2007 edit · delete This is tender, delicate and sad. I think there are a few rough spots, but on the whole, I very much like it. The one spot that really tripped me was the lack of transition into the last stanza. THat might just be me being a bad audience..but still. you should know it happened to me. (so you can mock me)
- stephan
