Mistah_Kurtz_HeDead: Daniel Ridges «
Two Haiku for June
I can't even put into words the stress that has enveloped my life over the past few months. I'm ready to let go.
Just when I'm certain
I have nothing left to say:
cloudburst speaks for me
red-eyed cicada:
seventeen years sans mating -
'swhy he can't fly straight.
- Jun 14
2- Doctah Idges 
on June 15 2007 - Edit · Delete
Now, they're closer to perfect.
3- Anstey on June 15 2007 - Edit · Delete
the red eyes are rather notable.
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- stephan
1- Leanne
on June 15 2007 - Edit · Delete
I want to laugh and cry at the same time, so you must be doing something right.
Though... have you thought about "Just when I'm certain" for your first line? I hate thats, that's all