Starla tastes of strawberries « The Good, The Bad and The Filthy «
bitter-sweet (adult content)
she begs me
push a little deeper
move closed
taste her skin
slide down
breathe
perfect heaving breasts
gasping for air
flick my tongue
pelvis tilt
deeper still
middle finger slide
camera light green
she never breaks eye contact
ever the actress
I never break rhythm
perform to the crowd
bitter-sweet
skin to skin
interlocked
delicate kiss
teeth on my thigh
push deeper
Shan on May 26 2008 edit · delete In S1 do you mean "Move Closer"?
I like this, I like sensual poetry.
I'm not fond of S2, L1, "heaving breasts" seem a bit cliche, Maybe a different way to say the same thing?
One other suggestion, add a word here or there to draw out the suspence
Just my two bits:)
----- Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
