Assembly

Assembly

Here

Allow me to help

Develop your skill

So that you’ll be unique

As gods are unique

All mysteries solved

According to formulae

All different the same

A solo duet

With a single duality

Everything’s fine

No need to cry

Everything’s fine

See? That didn’t hurt

Anstey on Oct. 2 edit · delete

This isn't my taste, and the line breaks in the first stanza bugged me.. BUT.. I did chuckle at the end... so that's cool!

Rws on Oct. 2 edit · delete

It probably isn't something I'd publish anywhere. It was a response to a critique of a writer on another site that was so overwhelmingly attempting to suck someone else's work into the critic's style that very little was left of the original.

Thanks

ZiGGY on Oct. 3 edit · delete
Was it me? lol /hidesinacorner

Rws on Oct. 4 edit · delete

No one nearly so famous, Z.

ZiGGY on Oct. 4 edit · delete
FEY MOOSE! tis a shame though, I try and keep up with all the kp gossip but the only thing that springs to mind is that 1 guy you, Leanne & Dale seemed to be ripping into, but that was more him on him rather than him on others so I dont know

Rws on Oct. 4 edit · delete

That was just another case of someone who felt he/she could write so brilliantly that he/she needed no critique or suggestions from lesser beings. You, on the other hand, are truly a breathe of fresh water for my tired gills.

Anstey on Oct. 5 edit · delete

if only those brilliant folks had to pay each of us unbrilliant folks a nickle. We could all retire.

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