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Flurry (Draft)
Cascading flash tripping down
tenor tone bounces jumping, leaping from the head
Muted squawk interjects tart exclamation point piercing the run
swing back through an alto weave darting across the ride
Flurry breaks to a mellow coronet conversation
answers, melding into the flow of low swing
Low pulse thumps and rises, countering
flash and blaze of harmonized conversation
Bounding back to the final declaration
in a haze of blurred euphony
but wanted to give my impression.