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And another thing..
I wonder, why has if become acceptable to start sentences with conjunctions? Several major newspapers have found this to be acceptable practice. I noticed this especially in the Wall Street Journal. I understand that folks may feel that writing closer to how we speak may be an acceptable trend, I do not agree. There are many speaking conventions (e.g. y'all here in the U.S. ) that do not carry over to the written word. And I excuse poetry as the form uses many unconventional structures to an intended effect.
The prior sentence is exactly the type of example I have seen. The "And" I included in the beginning could be removed with no change in intent. Read the sentence again while ignoring the "And" and you can see there is no change.
This has been a pet peeve of mine lately as I work in the business world where actual sentence and conveying thought in a professional manner is frowned upon and just plain confuses people.
2- Leanne
on Oct. 19 2008 - Edit · Delete
In poetry I can live with it -- up to a point -- but the number of people who are grammatically incompetent is quite disturbing. Grammatically convoluted is a completely different story; this makes me happy
If I see another story about police seeking "three armed men" or similar, I may just set someone on fire.
3- Joe R
on Oct. 19 2008 - Edit · Delete
So I guess the police had openings for three armed men eh? sounds like a posse being recruited
4- Laurie
on Oct. 19 2008 - Edit · Delete
And I am guilty for doing that of which you speak!
5- Anstey
on Oct. 20 2008 - Edit · Delete
wouldn't it be three-armed men?
6- Anstey
on Oct. 20 2008 - Edit · Delete
The key to business writing is that it be convoluted enough to ensure everyone is confused -- so as not to finish tasks so quickly that it looks like there's not enough work to go around.
1- Vidalia
on Oct. 19 2008 - Edit · Delete
And I do think you have a point. But the sentences are grammatically correct. However, it does tend to drive people insane.
V