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Comment: The Ballerina and Her Doc Holiday

First of all, this is extremely well done, i think. The ballerina-moon-western images all work together and form a surreal sort of story. I suppose knowing a bit about you, this is more powerful with your story, but regardless, I think it stands alone well. One minor point, I would get rid of the word 'apparently' -- i think the elipses do the job plenty well enough.
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  • stephan

by Anstey on May 3 2007