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 | The Hand You Cannot See - Snow revised. Title and all » |
| | Of Your Love |
| | Too Many Windows - This is very close to what I want here... any suggestions to improve it? » |
| | She Didn't Use Chapstick - From Stephan's Challenge » |
| | Laundry Service |
| | Michael's Mighty Wings - I am pushing myself to try different things. » |
| | The Mayor and The Blonde |
| | Cherries Roll Downhill |
| | The Earth IS Round |
| | Holding Silver - I think this idea is good, I need some suggestion here. » |
| | Details - Any thoughts? » |
| | August Chill - I worked on this quite awhile since it is now September. » |
| | Drinking Sangria |
| | Beyond Dreams |
| | Obstacles |
| | The Cool-Side of the Pillow |
| | Show me the Gold - Coming together nicely. » |
| | True Legends |
| | The Joy of Being Imperfect - Thanks for the help... I like this title much better although I did consider "Giant Squid has World's Biggest Eyeball" » |
| | April Glances |
| | Keeper of the Earth - An Earth Day Poem » |
| | Breathing Underwater - I am not sure if I like the last word, I mean I do, but would inhale work better and then change the "inhale" earlier in the poem or remove it? » |
| | Sleep Tight - First Revision done... » |
| | Keep Your Spleen - I have revised this and hope I made it more interesting and thought provoking. » |
| | wail |
| | Fierce Pride - REVISED RONDEAU... Hope this is better, I think I have the sylable count correct now. » |
| | Secret Code Name: Valentine - Just a little fun I thought of this morning while programming a routine. I know I have a strange sense of humor. » |
| | Kaleidoscope - Thanks for the help Stephan. » |
| | - 4 - Just a little fun... » |
| | Last Embrace - Thanks Stephan! » |
| | Needlessly Errant - I think this might be finished now. » |
| | Gravitational Peril |
| | Secrets of Longevity |
| | The Ghost of Redkey |
| | The Shape of Life |
| | Wild Prairie |
| | Steal My Breath |
| | Fracturing Fairytales: A Series of Poetic Disillusions - Poem II - Innocent Deception » |
| | Fracturing Fairytales: A Series of Poetic Disillusions. - Poem I - Disenchanted » |
| | Fracturing Fairytales: A Series of Poetic Disillusions - Poem III - Sleeping Deadly » |
| | Cold Reflection
- This is coming along, but the last stanza seems a bit ...well, weak maybe? Any help is appreciated. » |
| | just another parched soul |
| | Empty is the Jar - This is an exercise I tried, but I think it needs some help » |
| | Passion’s Betrayal |
| | Wait A Half Hour - From Stephan's "Stuck" Challenge » |
| | … and so we age. - I think I need something more with the last line, I'm not sure what to do with it. » |
| | The Spirit of My Dream - So the content is not too original, but at least I am writing again. » |
| | No title yet... - I wish I knew how to add a shakey font to the first and last lines... » |
| | Sorrow Wanders Among Dreams |
| | Drifting |
